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Yandere Poem

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Tell me why you looked at her
And please don’t give me lies
If you gaze upon another girl
I may have to take your eyes

Her hearts simply not worth your own
It appears much too small
Once I carved it out of her
It was only five inches tall

Please tell me that you love me
That you share in my lust
And don’t talk to another girl
Or I’ll grind her into dust

We can finally be alone together
As we bury her in the mud
Then I’ll write love a hundred times
With a hand soaked in her blood

She can’t love you as much as me
You know I love you to death
And that’s just what I’d say to her
As she took her dying breath

I know you’d never break my heart
Or tell me that we’re through
Cause if you did I’d be so sad
I’d have to break you too
Just a poem for a yandere character I'm working on... nothin too special
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I love your poems, but in this one the tenses of the verbs kind of clash, for example with 'And that’s just what I’d say to her  As she took her dying breath', because in the first part you say 'what I WOULD say', and then you'd expect a hypothetical situation, but you follow it up with 'As she took her dying breath', witch clearly is not hypothetical. Besides that, it's a great poem, though.